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Post by つくね on Jan 20, 2009 19:03:20 GMT -5
Here's a suggestion... keep if not all, most of your poems on the first post lol once this becomes like 10 pages long, it'll be hell trying to find it all
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Post by Alto on Feb 16, 2009 22:25:51 GMT -5
To Love is to Hate
A soft breeze blows a strand of hair upon your cheek
The look of amusement in your eyes renders me weak
Please tell me what I did to make you hurt me this way
The sun disappears behind grey clouds darkening my day
Hatred is a feeling that cannot easily be described
Adrenaline pumps through my veins refusing to subside
It's the calm before the storm and then the hurricane
The realization of knowing you gave your heart in vain
The rush that keeps me going until I forget your name
I give my solemn swear to one day beat you at this game
Let the rain fall upon me, let me drown in broken trust
Let the lighting strike me down and turn my love to dust
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Post by Yuri Hitoehi on Feb 16, 2009 23:14:20 GMT -5
Interesting. I like! =D
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Post by Dairyuujin No Shi on Feb 17, 2009 8:33:31 GMT -5
Nice one, as usual.  |
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